Some people think that it is a waste of money for countries to host big sporting events like the world cup, and that the money would be better spent on other things. However, others think that hosting large sporting events has a clear, positive impact on a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Surrounding the debate about whether countries pay an amount of money for athletic contests like the World Cup to organize, while some people suppose that the investments in these events would be squandered, others maintain it would positively contribute to the development of a country. I will address both opinions in the following essay.
Irrefutably, it is supposed that holding athletic events takes a vast quantity of money from the host nation. To ensure the success of these competitions, governments have to waste a large percentage of the national budget in order to serve different purposes such as sports facilities or mass media. In addition, there is no doubt that these competitions practically cause a capital loss in the economy. One of the most remarkable examples of this is Qatar who spent approximately 229 billion on World Cup infrastructure in 2022. Instead, those organizing expenses could be better allocated to improve the standard of living, eliminate starvation, and create a better life for their residents.
However, I believe that the excessive investment in arranging big international sports events has a great influence on different branches. First and foremost, these leagues certainly provide an enormous boost to tourism in host countries. Due to the huge profits through souvenirs, hotels, restaurants, fares or numerous others. Secondly, it is a good chance to promote their image globally, thus having more international cooperation for mutual development among nations in the long run. As previously mentioned, although Qatar paid a colossal amount of budget to prepare and celebrate World Cup 2022, it is undeniable that the spread of their image appeals to tourists.
In conclusion, celebrating an international sports event undeniably spends a lot of money, nevertheless, I personally believe that to be a host could provide advantages to the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... different branches. First and foremost, these leagues certainly provide an enorm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43243243243 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09355988544 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4568528622 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306343379418 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811944645066 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821145498055 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180083694881 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577819914144 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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