Some people think that ithe issue important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading and doing word puzzles other people believe that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time
In current tech savvy time, one of the most controversial debate is regarding the topic that which is most fruitful during free time; brainstorming activities, or mind relaxation? I shall explore the same from various aspects in following paragraphs before shaping my opinion at end of essay.
first and foremost, there are people who believe that leisure time can be make productive by doing recreational activities. They makeep their points by claiming that by reading: stories, novels, articles on current events, and science books a person can get a treasure of knowledge. because, the reading materials provide vast knowledge. similarly, in spare time it is very beneficial to solve puzzles, and doing brainstorming activities. the good illustration of this is, recently published results of research staTed that people who do productive things in leisure time are more adroit and peppy.
contrary to this, the opponents of this belief are prevalent. they make their view that in free time it is mandatory to rest mind convincing by saying that during the hectic schedule of every individual life mind isending behind every innovation, planning, and every task is supposed to be done with mind.therefore, it becomes very necessary to receive the stress by slepping and also by effectively proven physical activities such as meditation, and yoga which helps to change the state of mind. however, it is scientifically proven that having no relaxation to mind and continuous work, and tension results in serious health disorders like insomnia, headache, and even make people more sluggish. Therefore, it becomes compulsory to relax brain in spare time because mind is starring of all body parts.
to elucidate, manifold answers are provided to views of people. although, i believe that both kind of tasks are providing good results to people. however, it depends on ones interest and thinking that whether they want to do will increasing things or to rest mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24444444444 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84130353798 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.4503451942 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284939932376 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807605942068 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697427396594 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146806444989 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474614567403 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.