Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Magnificent buildings are now tourist attractions, and governments like to spend money on those buildings. However, people also need hospitals and schools as well. They are less perceptible, but it does not mean that people do not need them. So governments should spend money on them.
When tourists visit some destinations, the first place they will visit is impressive buildings. For instance, buildings like Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh, Vietnam, or Burj Khalifa in Dubai, which is some of the tallest buildings in Asia, bring many benefits to the governments and so do citizens in these places. Tourists want to see big buildings so they have to spend their money on these. Not only for entertaining places, those buildings are also used for many purposes such as being offices, art centers, and so on. In my opinion, governments have to spend more fees on city buildings if they want their countries are being well-known all around the world.
Nevertheless, another thing that people also mention is hospitals and schools need to be spent, too. Governments have to make sure that their citizens are looked after. If there are not enough schools for students or schools have not been repaired, they cannot be educated properly. So as schools, people need modern and needed facilities hospitals. In my area, we have a huge modern hospital. Recently, our government is building a place where elderly people live there.
In a nutshell, governments should spend money on urban buildings because they need to be the global status for their countries. In spite of spending on those buildings, they should make sure that they built modern schools and hospitals for their citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, another thing, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06115107914 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67207116065 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5084099537 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7647058824 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232247061199 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082546726796 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459363074395 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152604619197 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145949129585 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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