Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Other believe the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today’s modern world, many cities are growing rapidly with more large, monumental constructions which are typical things in a developed city, however the population is also increasing considerably that lead to some social problems such as the authority should pay more attention to the public infrastructures include school or hospital.
To begin with, the skyscraper plays vital role in any city because of many reasonable evidences. First and foremost, many cities in the world have wonderful construction which is specific emblem of them. For example, Opera House was specially designed in order to represent Australia. The skyscrapers are typical instances of modern life throughout twenty one centuries. They also demonstrate the development of technology and living standard of human compared to the past. Secondly, the demand for a comfortable and luxurious place for important business is increasing in society that brings big income and rising economic system of city from tax. For instance, the political problems always take place in a solemn and luxury building.
On the other hand, the dramatic growth of the citizen also causes some essential social problems. Due to living in a modern society people do not only need a comfortable place to live. Their demand for a good healthcare as well as a modern education system is going up. Therefore the government need to have appropriate guideline about improving these public infrastructures which should be paid more attention to. Firstly healthcare services is very necessary for people to prevent dangerous diseases in society which the inhabitant have to face with many serious menaces to their health such as air pollution or water pollution. Besides, education become an essential part of young generation that is very important to the development of human life nowadays.
In conclusion, the government should have appropriate guideline for both the development of cities and living standard of the citizen include healthcare and education system as well as some different social problems.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44236760125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92910111635 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1708429688 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.466666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8666666667 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134376302349 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403625173658 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337271546299 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085631512527 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230192541194 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.