Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays Discuss both views and give your opinion

Most of the individual believe that To become a successful person in your life, you must have a college degree. However, Another person denied this statement. This essay will intend to analyse both views along with my perspective.

To commence with, Most of the times it is necessay to have a professional degree for us to become successful person. In other words, some time we can't become expert in our field without professional degree. To explicate it, A Doctor must have either MBBS degree or other degree to become professional doctors. As a result, professional degree must have to become pro in some fields.

On the other hand, there is no need any degree to become success in life. In other words, In present time, There are more value of skills rather than a university degree. For example, the survey was conducted by reserchers found that to become a YouTuber, Blogger, Digital Marketer, Affiliate marketer and so on. Hence, experts is being proofed by it. we can say that skills is more important than a university degree.

To conclude, According to me, Skills in any field is more beneficial rather than a university degree in the present era.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, for example, as a result, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89898989899 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64399607283 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9884694482 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6153846154 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209237111917 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787490838245 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553571929896 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121282628659 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415031776159 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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