some people think loss of animals and plants cause environmental problems, others thinks there are more important problems.
These days, the community serounded by amount of environmental knots. There are some groups that believe it is because live habitats and, on the other hand, Another individuals are on the opinion of that there is pivotal reasons beside animals and plants. This essay consist both groups vision.
To begin with, some people think the loss of especial animals and plants. This can be, because of the life cycle. Everyone knows that animals and plants are directly effect on environment and there is a certain cycle and when it damage, all environment and habitat will be damage. For instance, When a planet, which is a food source for an especial animal, destroyed; that specie will destroy, as well. And it will strenghe till the environment will damage. Thus, people think this cycle is more important than we can observe.
Second group believe that there are more important reasons that animals. Actually, there is. Fossil fuels can be another important problem to the environment. every day the percentage of utilizing of fuels are rising and air is going to be more polluted every day. According to the former statement, this pollution can origins amount of problem for plants and animals. these, disadvantages can be the function of the plants and animals problem, Thus, this can be the pivotal problem.
To conclusion, The presence of the green life and animals can be incredibly important, but the fossil fuels have pivotal impact on both environment and it's detail and members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, second, so, thus, well, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02429149798 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53238138233 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51012145749 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5006443256 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5625 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28431242227 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877266044844 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094706354912 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132750893525 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773289407169 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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