Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
in what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
has this become a positive or negative development?
These days, technology has apivotal role in the people’s life. Every single connection is impact by technology and social medias. This essay explore the affection of the technology on the people’s life and communication.
The technology has a huge benefit on peoples connection. To illustrate, there are lots of different social medias that people use to connect to each other. Accordingly, This access to social medias improve the level of the communication and people can talk and chat to their friend and family the moment they want. In contrast, In the past times people have to use publice telephones or write a letter and they do not have wide community of people around them because of the lack of equipments. Thus, the technology improve people’s social relations and make the connection easy.
Work connection is another important relation in the individual’s life. With social medias and technology the bussines mens can improve their bussines quality and make some beneficial connections. They can access to the proper and useful information for their job and find employees, who are skilled appopriatly. With technplogy people can gain more knowledge and they can improve their skill and the managers can find these people with read their resume in social medias and all of these things are thanks to technology.
The technology have more positive affects on different types of relationships, because with that, people can connect and find their friends and family easily and it can improve the economy and bussines connection.
As whole, technology have much positivness and the nagative affects can be control easily, and people’s life quality and connections improve thank to technology.
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- Directions You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage Typicall 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'explores'.
Suggestion: explores
...echnology and social medias. This essay explore the affection of the technology on the ...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... of different social medias that people use to connect to each other. Accordingly, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...telephones or write a letter and they do not have wide community of people around...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, thus, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31985294118 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83050751911 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492647058824 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1602710648 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260925684711 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12024163692 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701669184925 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178113560659 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589160543233 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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