Some people think the main benefit of international co opeation is in protection of the environment, while other think that main benefit is in the world business. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Due to globalization, world has become a global village. Few individuals perceive that the fundamental advantage of world wide cooperation is preserving the ecosystem; however,the obvious boon is the world wide trade, which is conceive by a group of people.This trend is skeptical and hold bilingual perspective. Both the views are discussed further before giving my inclination.
Discussing the former view, where protagonists opine that the most significant benefit is that many government have realized that it is pressing issue. Due to that, if they make a particular community in each nation and developed countries provide money to the developing nation. As a reason, this issue can easily be solved. For instance, Kyoto agreement has been singed by many nations. Hence, any company can not set up any industry which emerge high amount of carbon dioxide. In addition to this, many people would become free of ailment through solely working on environment with the help of other nation.As, this is the main advantage for people. Apart from that, if individuals health is good. then, they might fully energetic in their own particular work. Eventually, overall contamination would be reduced.
Examining the letter perspective, antagonists believe their own benefit. The foremost one is that job opportunities can be increase at global level. In order to explain, unemployment is suffered by many nations. So,if any foreign infrastructure will establish their business in any territory. So, many people can have appropriate platform where they can open their own business. In add to this, this issue can be decrease with the help of international business market.
To sum up, render my opinion, I assent to this former view because protecting nature is essential for every nations. Also, nature and human are highly independent; whereas, other side of view has own positive perspective which ought to not be neglected.
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- Some people think the main benefit of international co opeation is in protection of the environment, while other think that main benefit is in the world business. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
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Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
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Suggestion: conceived
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...employment is suffered by many nations. So,if any foreign infrastructure will establi...
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...ective which ought to not be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, then, whereas, apart from, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36184210526 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94895399081 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628289473684 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7365745789 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134206253472 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348737337509 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440127260953 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788906616317 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192781810197 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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