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The given three maps illustrate the town of Brindell and residential area which developed over two centuries from 1800.
In the year 1800, Woodland area was located in northen east corner and in the south east corner farmland area covered with animals. Albert, left hand side of the farmland,there was blended town situated with small area. Although, rivers stour was located between Woodland and farmland. To add to it, to the north of the river stour, there was a farmland, which grew crops.
However, in the year 1900, Farmland,Woodland and Brindell situated at same place. But ,farmland was totally demolished. In addition, there was a small village developed for workers in south east corner , which name as a Bun Hill.As well as, few industries were built in the eastern side of the village.
Furthermore, at the end of the period (2000), there were mejor development shown in it. Firstly, Woodland area was divided into two parts. One was Woodland and second one was Bun Hill park. To add to it, there were maximum number of industries established in east of the village .Likewise, Bun HIll village was expanded compare to past century.
Overall, it is clear from the maps that, Brindell town totally transformed from a small town to the developed town.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, likewise, second, so, then, well, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99056603774 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6435468704 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542452830189 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4958470867 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3846153846 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0668573031605 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261720411136 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617271039575 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680473068955 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840066240349 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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