Some people think the main purpose of education is to make
individuals useful to society; others say education helps them to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the purpose that education serves. Some people state that education is as the tool for the advantages of society, while I believe that education fulfill the individual target.
On the one hand, it is clear that students with the best education perform the high level of moral standard than who absorb the low level of education. This is because education help foster in the young the morally sound values and outlook on the world and life. Moreover, these students are able to realize the importance of being a part of public service such as work as volunteers, take part in charity organizations to improve the society. Therefore, it is important that education provided the numbers of individuals for the sake of society.
On the other hand, in the modern life, an increasing number of people pay attention about the ambitious for their social status or earning a lot of money. I believe that the main purpose of education is to satisfy the personal gold. This leads to students make an attempt to be master in many fields as much as possible. For example, students are tending to into high and higher education for becoming qualified employees to earn a living and achieve life value. It is cannot deny that with the sustainable education of various knowledge and practical and professional skills, which is a prosperous road for personal freedom and fulfillment.
In conclusion, the major function of education is to reach individual satisfaction like power and money. Besides, education also helps people have proper in perspective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06060606061 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7275147199 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1190313075 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259716584609 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101529332129 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700186659881 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167429946324 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459976899039 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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