Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some
certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
One of the most debatable issue today relates to that men and women have same skills. Some jobs are suitable for men or rather than women i think gender difference are disappearing. presenting my view I would intend to explore the aforementioned view in following paragraphs.
On the one side of the argument that people who argue that some jobs are suitable for men or women. There are probably a number of factors involved farming tend to be a very difficult task and majority of males are like to do the agricultural rather than women because males have enable themselves to more strength and capabilities to hold the pain. As well as subsequent factor could be that majority of men's are likely to join the army and it is only favourable for men's. As a consequence during duty time difficulties are faced by the men's in the border. For instance, the recent findings and clear that in the Kashmir soldier stand at 2 degree Celsius.
On the other hand,it is possible to make the opposing case. It is often argue that today's era women have got many skills and in the companies or bank computer work is done by the women. Such as, in the India 10 percent women and 20 percent doctor and teacher respectively. The most evident would be that now a days men's are more well being to take the care of child rather than wives and it is obviously Favourable because some males are chief and they cook the food in home and their wives do job in the companies.
To conclusion, although there are good reason but in opinion women and women have lake of skills and they are successful their own field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53125 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4888422886 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5569305261 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374221909027 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135912238286 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157342468273 0.0667982634062 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225060943193 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980335414741 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.