The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertisements because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Advantages and disadvantages
To begin with, One of the most debatable issue today relates to advertisement should be banned.This must be because of it is a wastage of time. presenting my view it is a wastage of time.I would intend to explore my aformentioned views in upcoming paragraphs.
One of the most debatable issue today relates to there are quite an extensive diversity of advertisement should be banned considerably out weigh it's disadvantages. 'The' main reason for believing this is that it is a bitter truth 'some'of the famous people turn up the advertisement in the television relates to the smoking packs and also for some liquid. As a consequence young people watch the television and again without noticing weather product would be beneficial the fail to acknowledge the truth and accept the bitter truth and get addicted to drugs. Moreover, 'some' time duplicate companies emphasize the product on television and product is sold by the people which is wastage of money . For instance, 'some' fake agent give the address by advertising and people's go there and lost important time.
On the other hand it is possible to make the opposing case. It is often argue that advertisement is a best way to provide the knowledge about online sales of products. The chief cause might be that some sale's man open the males in local area and people are diprived of this information so it is a best way. The favourable fact could be that some artist introduce own self by the help of advertising and it gain the fame of the artist.
To conclusion, although there are good reason for to banned the advertisement. But in opinion it is a best way which provides the knowledge about new things and its uses and features.
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...out new things and its uses and features .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72945205479 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80566889759 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513698630137 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.260225231 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119018288418 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419516783253 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305591545054 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732174362209 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180024876886 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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