The maps below show the village of stockeford in 1930 and 2010.
The two maps illustrates the development and changes in the stokeford village last year over the period of 80 year.
Overall, we can see that in the first map was less developed, consisting of fewer farming area. On the other hand pedestrian area more construct.
If we look at the development east of the city centre, it can be seen that the retirement house knocked down to make way for a new large houses, and the farm house just east of this area were replaced by roads. Further north bridge was remainly same in the planed, and by 2010, a primary school had been enlarge in its place.
In the centre itself, the main road was pedestrianised, and in the place of shops new road built up for passenger and finay the residential area redevelop in the north east of town forest, which was cut down after 1995.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'house'?
Suggestion: house
...nocked down to make way for a new large houses, and the farm house just east of this a...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enlarged'.
Suggestion: enlarged
... and by 2010, a primary school had been enlarge in its place. In the centre itself, th...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 666.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45879111798 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668918918919 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2472221592 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0687857646779 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364231352206 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409734376353 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045732667135 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404718909537 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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