Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While positive steps have hitherto been taken to achieve equality between men and women in our society, it is believed that there is a great number of occupations that suit either men or women only due to their various qualities. In my judgment, I strongly agree with this opinion as such physically demanding jobs best suit men whereas women are more suitable for ingenuity ones.
First and foremost, it is true that people should be employed according to their qualifications and experiences instead of gender. Even though cooking was presumed as a women’s responsibility, a huge number of males have become successful and eminent chefs in restaurants or reality shows. To exemplify, America Master Chief is one of the typical TV shows which has created a solid proof that men can be a professional cook based on the considerable percentage of male contestants and judges. Nevertheless, there are specific sectors that prefer men over women.
It is justifiable that divergent careers that are physically required are at a higher chance of recruiting men more than their female counterparts. One case in point is that mining and mechanics are laborious and involved in handling heavy machines which are likely to demand the stronger sex. If this was not the case, women would be undoubtedly put in danger regarding health conditions and injuries. In addition to that, there are several fields that women have better performance and career prospects than men.
Contrary to popular belief, the deciding sector involved in choosing females over males is that women are more liable for meticulous and thoughtful professions. Education, nursing, hospitality, and public relations careers, for instance, where patience and caring are put on priority seem to have the majority of female staff because handling people diplomatically is one of the uppermost parts of the jobs. Hence, this would enable the possibility to create a significant conscientious and committed attitude towards their expertise. In spite of lacking muscular strength, it does not deter them from making a decisive contribution to the nation’s progression in general.
On balance, although gender disparity is incredibly faded, separating particular jobs where men or women perform better than their opposite-sex counterparts is admittedly more lucrative. I believe that both genders should work on their dream career no matter it is in the male- or female-dominated sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in general, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36528497409 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98029831477 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608808290155 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5687232681 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4375 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221432741102 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687227320425 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064273351268 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122701299288 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666918236029 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.