Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is usually thought that there are disparities in the types of job compatible for males or females owing to their distinctively physical and mental strengths. Although gender affects to career pursuit in a sense, I personally do not agree with the fact that it is the most vital standard.
On the one hand, supporters have their own reasons when believing that gender traits shape individual’s quality and accordingly, their future career. To illustrate, women are considered good at taking care others and having nurture ability that enables them to perform well in some certain jobs like nursing or teaching. Conversely, men are born with physical strength and decisiveness. These qualities make it possible for them to have excellent performance in some tasks that requires working under pressure and being a breadwinner.
On the other hand, I am convinced that with the spread of education and gender equality, more and more women are breaking the barriers of tradition and societal norm to work outside and step into their counterpart’s sanctuary. Perhaps Gordon Ramsay is one of vivid examples in this case. Some might claim that kitchen is the place belonging to women and then he shows the world they were wrong. Not only being a renowned chef, but he has also practiced tirelessly to become an inspirational host on reality TV shows related to recipes and the art of cooking. He undoubtedly achieve brilliant success worldwide. In addition, women’s social status has been improved thanks to the success of world-class businesswomen and politicians, Kamela Harris, Vice Prime Minister of the USA for example. This is a plain proof against the belief of gender-specific career pursuit. That is to say, selecting a future career not only depends on gender feature, but also based on other essential factors , be it name education background or their own flairs.
In conclusion, while there is still some truth to the aforementioned disparity in job selection, I think men and women are now equal in terms of such an aspect.
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- Some people think that men and women have different qualities Therefore some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people think that men and women have different qualities Therefore some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people think that men and women have different qualities Therefore some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[2]
Message: Consider using 'do disagree that' or 'do agree that'.
Suggestion: do disagree that; do agree that
...career pursuit in a sense, I personally do not agree with the fact that it is the most vital standard. On ...
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Line 6, column 575, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'achieves'.
Suggestion: achieves
... and the art of cooking. He undoubtedly achieve brilliant success worldwide. In additio...
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Line 6, column 987, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ut also based on other essential factors , be it name education background or thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, conversely, if, so, still, then, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13173652695 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88957690874 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616766467066 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3331125823 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.266666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243226090757 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684065230371 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071498071849 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158508385622 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724551405849 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.