Gender discrimination has been a burning topic in recent years, as women are underestimated in various aspects. The inequality between two sexes has led to an assumption that man are born to be a better competitor than woman. While there are some reasons why men are believed to be more competent, I do believe that the competitiveness between two genders should be placed equally.
On the one hand, men tend to be more competent than women in some cases. The reason is that, males are favorable in many parts of the world. In some patriarchal society where males have more rights than females, it is almost impossible for women to participate in competitions, such as political fights or job enrolments. Taking Chad as a typical example, women in this country barely have a chance to get access to education. Another reason is that, women have certain biological duties, such as giving birth or nourishing kids, that constrain them from going further in education or career ladder. As the result, some women quit their jobs or participate in light work in order to serve their families.
Although females face various difficulties that limit their capabilities, their competitveness are undoubtable. In schools, girls perform just as well, or even better than boys. Without the competitiveness, the result can be much different. In addition, women now work in almost every field, from traditional work such as tailor or housewife, to tough work like soldier or pilot and even politician. These jobs indicate that women’ capabilities are just equal to that of males, not to mention their sacrifices to families in some certain circumstances. With reasons discussed above, two genders’ abilities and comptitiveness should be considered equivalently.
Yet it is hard to measure individual’s competitiveness, and even more complicated to estimate a gender’s willingness to compete. A boy might be competitive in his job, but not in his social life and vice versa. Moreover, it is much to the environment that greatly influences the people’ eagerness to compete. If children, disregard of gender, grow in a family with parents are highly competitve, they are expected to be competitive. Therefore, gender does not play a significant role in determine the level of competitiveness of a person.
In conclusion, women are just as capable and competitive as men, even if they carry family’s duties or suffer social discrimination. Competitiveness is, however, abstract and hard to measure, and not to mention the fact that the environment is the decisive element in shaping a person’s competitive personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30787589499 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3260391862 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560859188544 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5428538197 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.090909091 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0454545455 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200441377494 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558225000338 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581818177022 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110817234888 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448661372622 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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