Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People tend to have a different views about whether men and women differ in their natural ability and performance to compete. Although both genders tend to be naturally different in various ways, I believe that being keen to compete does not related to their nature but nurture.
On the other hand, I believe that having a competitive personality does not related to human’s nature and it is absolutely acquired during people’s life which is not different in men and women. As Children are risen in different families with various culture and cultural preferences, they can be faced with different amount of competitiveness in their parents while they are growing up. As a result if a boy or a girl grows up in a family whose parents are eager to compete, children will learn this behavior and they will become more competitor in their future life because they are taught to be like this. That is why I believe that both males and females achieve their competitive personality in their life and their families directly affect their ability to compete with others.
Moreover, whilst there are many gender differences between both sexes, the competitiveness gap is related to the environment on which people grow. If children grow in a family that men are usually seen as a powerful sex, their self-confidence will improve throughout years and it makes them to believe in their abilities more than women and vice versa. People with higher self-esteem are tend to have a more competitive personality because hardly do they see themselves as a looser and that actually increase their eagerness to compete with others. As a result people are flourished to be a competitor human kind and this can be seen in both males and females according to their families’ cultural beliefs.
In conclusion, while there is a wide gulf between men and women natural characteristics, in my opinion, being a competitor has no relation to people’s sex because they gain this personality in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05120481928 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92731881703 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475903614458 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.0963063175 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 152.454545455 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1818181818 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159231233481 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797109083307 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491236346743 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121452565369 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247718483923 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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