Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Some people consider that mental toughness is part of the success for sportspeople, whereas another group of people believe that physical strength is necessary for athletes. I strongly opine that when it comes to sports, having mental strength is as important for players as physical fitness. And I will explain my belief in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, the reason why mental health is crucial in sports. First of all, mental toughness will boost the player's career to be better as much as possible. Moreover, the sportspeople have to have mental strength to always be ready to face challenges as well. Challenging such as competing with rivals who are always better than or under high pressure from the audience who are always hoping for talented athletes's winning. For instance, the top players like Ronaldo or Messi, they attract millions of fans around the world. Of course, they have the mental toughness to suffer from constant judgment and criticism if their scandal occurs.
On the other hand, physical strength is also vital for sportspeople. They need a strong physical body to avoid getting wounded in their body during the training process as well as the competition. For example, the player has to use a ton of power on their feet to run with high speed in athletics. Not only that, but they also have the muscle to be able to swim fast in order to reach their destination that they want.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that both mental strength and physical fitness play an important role for athletes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91954022989 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53429089088 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.945505257 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3571428571 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242374789331 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810179402257 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867742837449 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168180576784 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100280303122 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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