Some people think that in modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
family: "Times New Roman"; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">In modern societyfamily: "Times New Roman"; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">, some people think that humans are more dependent on each other, whereas others think vice versa. I strongly agree with that opinion.
family: "Times New Roman"; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">In this day and age, family: "Times New Roman"; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">the public are more dependent on each other. Firstly, with the development of economic and facilities, mankind tends to do not anything, because they think that they have money or the rights so they are usually haughty and become lazy. For instance, when it comes to a person who has a wealthy family, they usually rely on their family including studying and business. Secondly, the main cause of this critical lifestyle is laziness in both thought and action, not only that but also indulgences of almost all families. As a result, they do not control life, do not have the courage, no creativity, ... easily stumble against in their path. From my point of view, I think people may be proactive in everything, not depend on other people in order to reach one’s goal and become confident.
family: "Times New Roman"; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">However, all over the world, there are not just those who rely on each other but also people who tend to be more independent. those people rarely rely on something, they usually do it by themselves and they go on their own path independently. Research has found that independent person usually successful easily and mature sooner than the others.
family: "Times New Roman"; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Taking everything into consideration, people become more independent by earning money, controlling their studying, but besides that they also rely on other people to do household chores or look after their offspring. I would like to reiterate that people have to try to do their works and become fully self-sufficient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2590.0 1615.20841683 160% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 7.09589041096 5.12529762239 138% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.19663224714 2.80592935109 185% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479452054795 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 750.6 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 137.693120945 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.666666667 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159438240264 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699480045747 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071027583246 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114035709479 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583786703266 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.0946893788 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 4.82 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.6 11.3001002004 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 24.2 12.4159519038 195% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.