Opinions are divided into whether we count on other individuals more often, or we need less companionship than before. From my perspective, I am inclined to the vision that people are much more independent in current society.
Proofs abound for the view that human beings depending on each other is a ubiquitous phenomenon, chief of which consists in the huge strides in the advancement of communication methods. For example, it was not until the success and spread of mobile phones that people can contact with others any time they want. Our predecessors conveyed information to distant relatives only by writing letters, which was inconvenient and would alienate the relationships.
However, the thought that individuals in contemporary society are prone to reside independently is more prominent and persuasive. For one thing, with technology developing by leaps and bounds, the duties which used to require people to work together have decreased dramatically. For instance, because of the invention of the-state-of-art machines, farmers do not have to seek help from relatives or neighbors to harvest their ripe crops. For another, not only do changes happen physically, but also the mental world has altered today. Solid evidence stemming from statistical studies illustrate that a significantly increasing number of women and men select to neither give birth to children nor even marry with others.
In conclusion, although there may be some reasons to uphold that we are living in a more connected world, I still espouse and embrace the idea that we indeed have switched the lifestyle to an more independent one.
- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films Why could this be Should governments give more financial support to local film industries 56
- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 89
- In modern society some people argue that schools become unnecessary as children can study at home via the Internet Do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... neighbors to harvest their ripe crops. For another, not only do changes happen phy...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e indeed have switched the lifestyle to an more independent one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31517509728 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01301511441 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68093385214 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6672494124 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270557458988 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858994388609 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638496036068 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160210074654 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582610956598 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.