Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Today, people presume that we tend to live on our own in development society while someone believes that human’s life should connect broadly to one another. In my opinions, I agree with the second statement.
There are two reasons why people think that we are more independent. Firstly, because of the growth of information technology, people can share their feeling with artificially online software. For example, Facebook offers its users an app which can find users’ pain, and give some advice to them. Therefore, more and more people are attracted and do not care about communication in real lives which is the basic instinct of humans. Secondly, people used to do with each other household choir which now are done by intelligent machines, so people can easily live on their own with helping of modern technology.
By contrast, I believe that people, today, tend to live a wider connection with others. On the one hand, a more and more personal organization like to collaborate with another to develop their own advantages. For instance, today, markets depend on deeply to logistic companies which help these supermarkets can delivery goods to consumers in the fastest way. On the other hand, modern buyers tend to choose and buy everything on the Internet and some stores have to make a link with some web sites to help them to introduce their products. This is the reason local shops tend to cooperate with Amazon to sell more goods.
In conclusion, people in modern society can live on their own or depend on others, in my viewpoint, I totally agree with the following option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98507462687 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67314224521 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6806780816 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275890606046 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998468481816 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875071580165 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156653418059 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071020148449 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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