Some people think that in the modern world we have become more depend on each other while other think that people are now become self-dependent. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Modernisation has changed the living standard of the people. So therefore, a group of people advocate that today people are dependent on each other. Whereas, other contradicts this view by asking that people are now becoming self-reliant. So this essay shall analyse both the aspects along with my opinion in the upcoming paragraph.
According to the first school of thoughts, there is various points which shows that today masses are dependent on others. Firstly, youngsters are relying on their parents because they are not self-dependent financially so their parents are fulfilling their basic needs and demands. Not only this, parents are also dependent on their grandparents because these days everyone are running the blind race behind the money for the luxurious lifestyle so they do not have enough time to nurture their children so they take a help from their grands.
According to the second school of thoughts, these days multitudes are becoming self-reliant. The prime one is that, learners do not dependent on their teachers for studies because in this advance era there is online classes are available for the students so they are joining these classes for the studies instead of teachers. Further, youngsters are doing part-time job after their studies to earn the money so they do not financially depend on their parents.
In my opinion, human is a social animal. Everyone is dependent on each other whether it us visible or invisible. As when the students are studying online classes so these videos is also uploaded by someone else. Furthermore, today most of the people order the foods from outside, so these foods is also made by another person.
Overall, after a lots of thoughts and deliberation it is true to say that masses are reliant on each other whether it is directly or indirectly as people are ponder that technology is very helpful for their self-dependent but the technology is also invented by someone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...day people are dependent on each other. Whereas, other contradicts this view by asking ...
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...ording to the first school of thoughts, there is various points which shows that today masses are depen...
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...he second school of thoughts, these days multitudes are becoming self-reliant. Th...
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...for studies because in this advance era there is online classes are available for the students so they ...
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...udying online classes so these videos is also uploaded by someone else. Furthermo...
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...de by another person. Overall, after a lots of thoughts and deliberation it is true...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, whereas, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10971786834 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70020801391 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507836990596 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0227015795 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180201642774 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079108477846 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090792651513 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124217515413 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955413609481 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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