some people think that in the modren society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other while other say that individuals are becoming more independentof each other.Discuss both views and your opinion.
There has been different opinions regarding the dependence or independense of people in the last decades. Due to some factors modern humans are more independent rather than past times, I will clarify my view in this essay by giving examples.
On the one hand, it is true that, people are being more dependent to things like gadgets and the Internet. if we glance around us, we may notice that mobile phones, laptops and electrical equipments are the part of our life. peoples tend to live as well as work with tiny gadgets in order to easily solve the problems. Unfortunately, this may lead to serious issues such as being unsociable, agressive and prefer virtual life than real one. Advance of new technology allow dependence on machines in 21 st century.
On the other hand, it is clear that, democraticm provides more freedom than other political ways. if we compare the status of human with ancient times, it is sure that people never have been independent like nowadays. Slavery also other types of obidience to people are eradicated. Moreover, people especially youth feel themselves independent in making essential decisions namely choosing a job, find proper place to live or marrying the person whom he or she loves. In past times, teenagers faced with obstacles when they planned ideas. Today, in our society person's right is the main than any authority, that's way I consider that people gain more independence because of development in all spheres of life.
In conclusion, reformas in policy, government and widening of horizon in people bring independence. For this reason, I think modern people do not dependent to another person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06227106227 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68148381164 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655677655678 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.822806244 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181202856203 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603586498149 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580029076039 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1029187368 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376294477341 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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