some people think that in the modren society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other while other say that individuals are becoming more independentof each other.Discuss both views and your opinion.
Many believe that this modrenization made us reliant on each other. Because everyone is depends on others to fillfull their needs. However some others have conflicting views.they think people are reliant on their own kind. Here,i would like to support for both views with my own perception.
The first and foremost,In this high-tech era,offsprings necessity has increased and accomplish their needs individuals are dependent on each-other because of their busy schedule. When people get a job then they mostly rely on different kind of services such laundary services, restoraunts, and house maides and so on. In the past days people used to do most of the work on their own. While, now-a-days everyone wants to climb a ladder of social status. So, nobody have a time to manage their necessary works.
Furthermore, the prizes of everything such as education, houses and basic needs materials are skyrocketing day by day. In nuclear families are dependent on each other.such as when they become a capable to earn bread and butter then their parents rely on them.
On the other hand, some people assert that in this competitve era, offsprings try to keep up the appearence that they are accessible to do everything on their own.most of the children take their own decessions such as, related to career and any other field.In many countries, wards rely on their own for their education and other basic requirements after certain age. Gender impowerment movements make women free and independent from men.
Apart of this, electronic devices become convenient in these days. In the pursuit of get more and more, in this competitive era everyone depends on these gadgets such as, washing machine, microwave, loaf maker and so on. considering the efficiency of devices, these facilities gain ground.
As a result, some think everyone is rely on each other to accomplish their basic needs.Here, i personally believe that we all are free and independent.We are capable to take their own decesions without any obstacles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17682926829 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80004222582 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576219512195 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8951029194 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8823529412 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255723604965 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803017707559 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687183380969 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137916509349 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539465267783 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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