Food can be produced cheaply by using improved fertilizers and machinery. At the same time, it has some dangerous effect on local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Because of advancement in technology, innvantion of reasonable prices Fertilizers and modren machinery has ushered a revolution in agriculture. However, the excessive use of pesticides take a heavy toll on human health and environment as well. Individual prone of many fatal diseases such as cancer, increase in quantity of chemicals for example urea in the body. This essay would agree with this statement how human suffering from various problems because of fertilizers.
First and foremost, using fertilizers agriculture domains to produce more and more in same piece of land helps to inpetus the monetary growth of the country. For example by exporting Cereals like wheat, pulses,grains a huge amount of money can be earned from other nations. Furthermore, efficient amount of food crops is essential for providing food to poverty stricken people . The poor can purchase food at every nook and corner at very low prices. Apart from this, inhaste to manufacture more crop has established various chemical manufacturing industries and grain stored houses for enter-penureship on large scale. As a result, fertilizers in agriculture give massive contribution to country's economy and individual.
On the other hand, in spite of the in spite of its many benefits, its negative cannot be overlooked. The use of pesticides insecticides in huge amount stams many fatal diseases such as cancer, high blood pressure and so on. Next, Biological magnification is also a main factor of concern because the concentration of chemicals in human and other species is increasing day by day. Moreover fertilizers create air pollution because of spreading of chemicals. These poisonous particles react with air and increase the contaminants in air and adverse effected air quality. These fertilizers are main realistic source of reducing soil fertility day to day. Therefore, fertilizer create many health hazards and imbalance the environment.
In conclusion, to weighed up the pros and cons of fertilizers in agriculture Sectors, I believe that these Chemicals and machinery inculcate the individual and social economy but also give birth to numerous problems. So, fertilizer should be used in sufficient amount for better growth of crops and in order to accomplish basic needs of individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4604519774 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07646904315 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3045318946 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.736842105 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57894736842 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145247137764 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425825978852 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033958242372 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817426329245 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372197730537 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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