Modren technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans.Does this have a positive or negative effect on people? Give your opinion with example.
It is irrefuctable that in this high- tech era, To use the machines by individuals is believe to be a boon. these devices have reduce humans labour with great extent. Here, before forming any firm opinion, Its pros and cons will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, The availablility of machines in individual life nourish each with maby advantages. To examplify, all gadgets such as combine, tractor, cultivator and so on has save optimum time, advancement in new technology has bring evolution, now-a-days many develop countries take help of new gadgets such as robots, machines in order to accomplish all household chores. Gone are the days when people need to carrt heavy weights with themselves,had to travel lot of distance without vehicles and so on. In present, transportation of all goods are not difficult. Secondly, innvention of machines and equupments bring a excellent approach in medical field, with the help of advanced devices for humans become easier to cure fatal diseases, high technical apparatus caradiac operation, surgical become simpier for doctors.consequencly, machines has make individual life convenient and effortless.
Nevertheless, New devices have more benefits for individuals but the negative side of these machines can not be ignored. Firstly, the excessive use of machinea has great impact on human beings. In this era, people prefer to buy robots for official work and factories instead of hiring labourer and unemployment increasing day by day because of gadgets. Secondly, individual rely on devices for doing all domestic chores, people become lazy due to their sadentary life style, all have uses modren tools like calculator, mobile phone and so on. as a result, society of people become less creative due to less movility, people prons to many diseases such as duabitics, fattiness and so on. In result, our more dependence on modren technology has bad impact on individuals life.
In my opinion, This modren technologt bless individuals with many facilities and change their life in plenty of positive ways by providing optimum opportunities to grace their life. However, its negatives can not be underestimate. Every person should not depend on modren machines. physical work is essential to some extent to keep them fit and fiddle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34065934066 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97607494845 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7189409903 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210471825426 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610171947731 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334504128721 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126734260217 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277733976395 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.