now a days more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. it is a positive or a negative development?
the advancement of sophisticated technology has been seen in the field of communication way. Many a deweller is glued to their cellphone and use various social website to socialise with friends instead of personal meeting. However, it is a negative development that can have for reaching consequences.
To begin with, social media has many negative side. First and foremost, studies have shown excessive online socialization that can lead to depression, isolation, Indifference and many other health problems. Moreover, majority of people create fake profile in order to chatting other users. there are numerous intances of teenager commiting suicide after being cheated by their online friends. Furthermore, many people who are addicted to online socialization, have hardly time for talking to their family members or neighbours. They most of the time prefer to remain alone in their room. So, this effects family relationships. therefore, the warmth of relationship been taken back seat and individual to become isolated.
Next, social media friendship has lack of truthworthy love and affection. No one can expect his online friends who are living another part of the world to help us when we are in trouble. On the other hand face to face communication lead to the development of true relationship that is long lasting. Meeting with friends and nearer and dearer give us a memorable experience which boost our happiness.
To conclude, although internet has enriched our lives in many ways but if we are addicted to this, it effects our relations. So, l think people should use it but in limit because it can not take place of real relationship and online friendship is not long last.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92576556145 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1466005632 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16511336614 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477154381293 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533400186464 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091282994446 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346498587877 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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