parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to give children what consequences could this type of parents have for children as they get older.
no doubt, To fulfill all need of children by their parents for better nourishment is not a perfect method. It engendered numerous bad habits in their offerings. This essay will discuss that how it has a negative impact on children by accomplish all requirement by elders.
The first and foremost, giving all freedom by parents main lead to serious consequences such as parents make their children selfish, the value of cooperation with section of society has diminished and so on. Secondly, parents encourage their children to become a spendthrift and make them unable to create economical balance in their life. Some children lose their interest in study and get freedom to do some Anti Social activities. Apart from this, parents buy electrical gadgets to their wards in order to enhance their knowledge. They make their children dependent because of excessive use of these tools and children become lazy due to lack of mobility. As a result, the ideas to Nourish their children in careless way take a back seat.
I believe that when children become younger then because of these minor faults they have to face many challanges in their life. They can be diverted from education life and their children may be involved in criminal movements. Children have to suffer from economical poverty and parents had to levanter money. Conseqently, Providing all facilities to their offspring may deprive their words from all moral etiquettes.
In conclusion, Having weighed up the pros and cons, parents purchase all unnecessary things for their children to raise them.by complete their all demands children become mannerless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20992366412 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67297954523 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.543971709 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465416746512 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173355703034 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560837178106 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293694001687 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652618547628 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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