Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both these sides and give your opinions.
It is often a question as to what an appropriate gift should be to a teenager.While some people believe gifting them money is the best idea, others don't agree to this. In my opinion, gifting money to a teenagers doesn't seem a sensible choice.
Teenagers have varied interests and it can be confusing to adults as to what they like hence, they prefer gifting money to the adolescents. Sometimes the teenagers don't like the gifts purchased by adults which can be quite opposite to their interests. Money can be saved for their future use in the form of savings. Furthermore, it can help them understand the importance of saving money.
On the other hand, teenagers can misuse the momey given to them and sometimes tend to do drug abuse when they are given a huge sum. They tend to overspend on unnecessary materials and do not value the money given to them. Rather than gifting money, we can gift them with various gift cards which can be used in the gamming arenas, shopping malls, in spas and salons.
In conclusion, it is always better to gift them something which can be preserved or can be more meningful to them rather than gifting money.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...ppropriate gift should be to a teenager.While some people believe gifting them money ...
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Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ing them money is the best idea, others dont agree to this. In my opinion, gifting m...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teenager' or simply 'teenagers'?
Suggestion: a teenager; teenagers
...o this. In my opinion, gifting money to a teenagers doesnt seem a sensible choice. Teena...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...y opinion, gifting money to a teenagers doesnt seem a sensible choice. Teenagers ha...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he adolescents. Sometimes the teenagers dont like the gifts purchased by adults whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, while, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67487684729 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5442193308 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546798029557 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4789791032 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202241197901 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979151053467 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569093508858 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1459865145 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806734710537 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...ppropriate gift should be to a teenager.While some people believe gifting them money ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ing them money is the best idea, others dont agree to this. In my opinion, gifting m...
^^^^
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teenager' or simply 'teenagers'?
Suggestion: a teenager; teenagers
...o this. In my opinion, gifting money to a teenagers doesnt seem a sensible choice. Teena...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...y opinion, gifting money to a teenagers doesnt seem a sensible choice. Teenagers ha...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he adolescents. Sometimes the teenagers dont like the gifts purchased by adults whic...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, while, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67487684729 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5442193308 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546798029557 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4789791032 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202241197901 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979151053467 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569093508858 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1459865145 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806734710537 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.