Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is too important for everyone to choose one gift for young people. Someone think that money is the best gift. I agree with those who suggest others gift are more suitable.
Many people believe that money is excellent gift at the moment. money makes us feel wealthy, carries high material value, and everyone go to work to make money so when they are got a money without having to work, they will be very happy. however, this makes few negative things. Human’s cupid is infinity. when they make money easily, they will become dependent of gift. between money gift and others gift, of course, they feel interested in money more. they will have other attitude and discrimination between gift giver.
On the other hand, I agree with opinion that actual gift is more suitable than money. giving a gift is way to show that you are loved by giver. Not everyone is got a gift. gifts is things that used to give on special day, even they respect or love you. A gift carries more spirit value than material value. it brings for receiver more than material value. For example, a book brings for reader knowledge; some apples bring nutrients, delicious meal, improve health.
In conclusion, nowadays, money is a gift which is often used to give. however, I agree with those who suggest offers gift are more suitable than money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
it is too important for everyone to choose...
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Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...oose one gift for young people. Someone think that money is the best gift. I agree wi...
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Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...oose one gift for young people. Someone think that money is the best gift. I agree wi...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Money
... money is excellent gift at the moment. money makes us feel wealthy, carries high mat...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...work to make money so when they are got a money without having to work, they will be ve...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: However
...aving to work, they will be very happy. however, this makes few negative things. Human’...
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Suggestion: When
...tive things. Human’s cupid is infinity. when they make money easily, they will becom...
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Suggestion: Between
...ly, they will become dependent of gift. between money gift and others gift, of course, ...
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...se, they feel interested in money more. they will have other attitude and discrimina...
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Suggestion: Giving
...ctual gift is more suitable than money. giving a gift is way to show that you are love...
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Suggestion: Gifts
...d by giver. Not everyone is got a gift. gifts is things that used to give on special ...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: It
... more spirit value than material value. it brings for receiver more than material ...
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Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rients, delicious meal, improve health. In conclusion, nowadays, money is a gift...
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Suggestion: However
... is a gift which is often used to give. however, I agree with those who suggest offers ...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fers gift are more suitable than money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73275862069 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19952635156 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560344827586 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6896305908 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.7894736842 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2105263158 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289811851239 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105597475532 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712328376947 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194197509308 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04298650453 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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