Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people, while others think the purpose of museums should be to educate, not entertain. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Museums are unique places where important objects of cultural, historical and scientific models are preserved. There have been divided opinion on the topic that people visits museums only for enjoyment and entertaining themselves from boring life. Some people readily comply this views; while others argue that museums are for getting knowledge of different domain. Ahead of my stand, both opinions should be analysed.
Examining the former view, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is that today’s interactive museums are always crowded. This is because, people consider the museum as picnic place and enjoy there. Additionally, it attracts younger people. They think that it is cheaper place to get enjoyment in fully air-conditioner environment.
On the flip side, other groups of individuals feel that museums help to improve the advance knowledge toward different and unique domain. In addition, museums give vital information because they highlight the achievement that have been accomplished by well-known persons throughout the history. Every citizens can get awareness in direction of unique concept of past. Visiting it is an eye-opening experience. Furthermore, last year students who are studying an art and culture program at university have to make project on any historical truth. That’s why we can find higher visitors in form of educational institute’s students. Moreover, experts in the subject of art are highly interested to get dipper information on historical event. Thus, this type of place helps to researcher. What next, museums should fulfil researchers expectation. Museums’ environment also helps to make higher willingness of visitors to earning data.
To sum up with my opinion, I tend to believe that people should not think that museum is not place for relaxation and entertainment because it is mainly for getting historical knowledge. Museums always try to educate people. Thus, museums always helpful place to get information of past achievement, unique art, endangered species’ parts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68709677419 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0175156378 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616129032258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6523240621 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9523809524 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7619047619 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324169300558 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879854627694 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705721354592 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212286009364 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752041737425 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.13 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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