Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to
entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is
to educate.
Discuss both views and give you own opinion
On the one hand, many people suppose that the main role of museums is the entertainment .Museums are one of the top priorities of tourists. They exhibit large collections of artefacts. Most of the visitors who are not specialized in archeology and museology would become bored when they have to listen too much. Hence, the museums provide some others interactive ways to entertain them. For example, in the Egyptian museum of Cairo; they have entertainment section with various activities where children, seniors and students can attend training courses for making archeological replicas, playing games and the principles of conservation and restoration for cultural heritage.
On the other hand, some people argue that museums should only focus on educational aspect . The reason for the museum display is to teach visitors information bout history, culture and the technology of ancient materials and industries. Some museums provide the objects by labels, while other museums offer audio recordings so that visitors can listen about the monuments. Furthermore, some of them employ professional archaeologists to illustrate to their visitors. For instance, the Egyptian museum of Egyptian civilization, allows archaeology students to practice their vocational training by explaining the monuments for the local people.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the ideal museum play an important role in both education and entertainment so that people can have enjoyable and educational experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64159292035 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04112841411 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2050727383 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.909090909 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223752402005 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919878622859 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072669881786 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153885245214 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489908656829 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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