Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The world cup football matches and Olympics are the most significant sporting events among the world. They are very important in easing the tensions and alleviate the wounds between different nations and explode patriotism feelings among individuals safely. However, some people believe that such events can increase the conflicts and implacability between the countries.
On the one hand, the world cup and Olympics games can easing the tensions among different nations by spreading the tolerance and cooperation between the rivals . Furthermore, there will be harmonious feelings between the fans and that has impact in the relations between nations as well. For example, Nigeria did not qualify before the semi-final during the last handball world cup that has been held last August against Egypt and because of the good relations between the two African states , the Nigerian people and the team was supporting Egypt at the final .
On the other hand, sports match can make the relations worse and it can leads to undesirable repercussions. For instance , football games between Egypt and Algeria are always a big matches in the two countries . During the African cup in 2010, there was a hating speech between the media in two countries and that exploded in such an aggressive way between the players and the audiences themselves after the match. As far as I know from that time till now there are tensions and limitations between both nations even at the social media programs.
In conclusion, I think that the international sporting occasions can play a good role easing the tensions or release the patriotism. However, i believe that games cannot be the pivotal way for easing conflicts and increase the patriotism safely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21863799283 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67353476455 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512544802867 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3594756887 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168131192719 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725673446754 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660486474084 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124393385629 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647998896059 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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