Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
There is an argument that people visit museums as a way to get rid of stress, meanwhile, others think the fundamental aim of museums is education. From my own perspective, not only do museums help us to relax but they also teach us a variety of things.
it is manifest that visiting museums gives us a great opportunity to broaden our horizons. A wide range of relics, artistic pictures or antique statues displayed there make us more curious about what happened a long period ago and we will search for information about them simultaneously to gratify our problematic questions. it intensely does wonder to us, especially adolescents when they can apply in their study and researching. only by visiting museums and blowing our soul into the exhibits can we bolster up our look on the beauty as well as criticize something. it is experts in the museums that give us deeper insight into the origins of displayed things and mysterious stories about them, which meet our demand to be more knowledgeable.
Together with providing ample information to visitors, museums are also considered as places of interest in which we can find a lot of hilarious things that we have never experienced before. The more hectic our life is, the more pressure are put on ourselves and when technology cannot entertain us any longer, people will drop in museums with touched exhibits with a view to blowing off steam. So miscellaneous the museums are that we will be made a deep impression and immediately forget all about fatigues. For instance, I get a kick out of staying in a museum for hours whenever I feel stressed. looking and thinking carefully about a picture is really effective in doing away with my negative thoughts.
In conclusion, we are supported to spend more time on museums, not only for their splendid education but also for a great source of entertainment.
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- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate Discuss both views and give you own opinion 84
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate Discuss both views and give you own opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87697160883 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84955669016 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589905362776 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6342135335 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187686145223 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702476849664 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057621685588 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115395158156 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706102751718 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.