Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
people have different view about the role and function of museum. In my opinion museum can both entertaining and educational.
In the begin, the main role of a museum is to entertain. Mostly attention foreign visitors are visited of the museum that they can entertain and seek knowledge from different historical history. some visitor may become bored he or she has to read or listen to too much education content. so museum often put their more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning.
in other hand, museum is an important for coming new generation which give pervious history knowledge through the museum. Now-day, school and universities are visit museum that the students can entertain and give knowledge. This way, museum can play an important role in teaching people about history,culture,science and many other aspect of life.
In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer interest, entertain and education experience that people can fun and learning about something at some time
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1369047619 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96372986756 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1300417452 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329975134382 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13822019071 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486394102107 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208669825068 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102691634444 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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