Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch TV news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is much debate over the relevance of mass communication to the real world. Many people consider receiving the latest news from newspapers and television shows to be time-consuming, however I completely disagree with this view. In my opinion, this kind of information plays an vital role in our life.
Admittedly, information from press or TV news programs may not appeal to a number of readers and audiences. The main reason is that due to their different interests and concerns, people may only pay attention to the news featuring the subjects they take into account. For instance, sport-minded individuals tend to be fascinated by reading sport daily news, while businessmen often look forward to the updates of economic situation. On the other hand, watching or reading the news which is irrelevant to people’s interests seems to be a waste of time to them.
Nevertheless, there is no doubt that media news is closely associated with our daily life. To begin, newspapers and TV programs are claimed to be the fastest ways to acquire new information about every aspect of life. Due to the development of broadcasting technology, news is transmitted to readers and audience as soon as the information is collected and edited, that helps people keep up with the changes and events occurring worldwide. For example, the COVID-19 pandemic has become one of the most serious health crises in human history. Without everyday news, people may hardly know about its origin, dangerousness and how to protect ourselves from this disease. Moreover, media news is also influential in shaping public opinion. To illustrate, it is true that a plethora of conflicts occur because people have various thoughts over the same thing, or new ideas contradict to familiar concepts. Through means of media, people can comprehend fully about the situation of their community, also innovative developments. In this way, people can share the same general knowledge and strengthen mutual understanding.
In conclusion, due to the diversity of people’s concerns, some audiences may find media news irrelevant to the real world. News not only has close connection to our daily lives from providing the latest information to forming public opinions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...opinion, this kind of information plays an vital role in our life. Admittedly, in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25139664804 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93753301519 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5793810027 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.444444444 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312490535783 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906844949468 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647201693793 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187823938447 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438391458826 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.