Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then
it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that news is irrelevant to contemporary life and has no practical
value in spending time reading platforms that provide breaking news. I totally
disagree with this viewpoint as news help us to be more informed about many
different issues.
There are some reasons why reading newspapers or watching television news
programs is useful for our daily lives. Chief of these is related to the necessary
information gained from reading news. More specifically, newspapers and
televised programs provide regularly academic topics about school subjects that
are beneficial for students, as well as vast helpful information such as domestic,
international socio-economic situation, prices of commodities that are practical
for workers. In addition, the press is also an information channel for
entertainment purposes after tiring working and studying hours thanks to many
poems, short stories, and funny images supplied from these platforms.
Another justification for why I believe that reading news plays a vital role in our
lives is that the press is also a means for authorities to promote ideas aiming at
bringing benefits to residents. For example, the U.S government can propagate
notions related to fighting against corruption and negative social phenomenons
on front page of newspapers to encourage inhabitants to contribute their efforts
to these campaigns. As a result, by creating consensus between officials and
individuals, negative problems is quickly prevented, leading to a healthy social
environment and sustainable development.
In conclusion, I strongly oppose viewpoint that there are not any interrelation
between news and our daily lives owing to the demand for society and basic
human needs. Furthermore, I hope that Information providing tools will be
increasingly upgraded and expanded in the future.
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- Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that government should make it fee for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... news help us to be more informed about many different issues. There are some reasons why rea...
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Line 16, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...nefits to residents. For example, the U.S government can propagate notions relat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7761732852 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07917055357 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635379061372 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4420356161 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.454545455 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188817837354 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789904507435 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795286463395 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502639563139 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770045789001 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.