In the last two decades possessing last news became vital for the majority of people and several people claim that newspaper the most effective source which can impact people than other origins. However, I completely disagree with this statement due to a few convincing evidence which I will provide.
To begin with, the last two decades the way to obtaining news drastically altered by virtue of technology such as the social network because it is quite faster and convenient to use while the newspaper still tough to acquire. Likewise, by enhancement of technology vast majority of people abandoned to use newspaper, which made it unpopular among residents. For instance, in many countries, youngsters even do not know that the newspaper remains in the sale so that it concedes to the internet news.
Another point is that it is troublesome to produce even we do not include there tremendous time which takes to prepare for the sale.
To produce a bunch of newspaper require a huge effort such as machine and employees which makes it a bit of expenditure for private business. For this reason, the manufacture of the newspaper saw a substantial fall last two decades while the fame of social network news posts is rising. The main cause why making a newspaper do not still is the government must retain the production of the newspaper owing to the promotion of local business which requires advertisements.
Therefore, I deliberate that the time of the newspaper remained in the past so that it hard to equate it with mass media.
- The chart below, shows the amount of money per spent on fast foods in britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent. 73
- Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media 73
- These days young children spend a lot of time using computers tablets and smart phones Some people think that introducing children to technology at a young age is beneficial others believe that they would benefit more from playing traditional games D 93
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Disscuss both view 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...business which requires advertisements. Therefore, I deliberate that the time of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, likewise, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9305019305 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7714693435 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548262548263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.2613102422 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.7 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160831790275 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581934381548 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599700721942 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082247788223 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551030210275 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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