A glance at the chart provided reveals the water usage for residential, industry and agriculture in San Diego country, California and another widespread world. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that using water for the residential purpose was higher in San Diego and California except for another whole world.
Looking at the details, firstly in San Diego country, just 60 percent of people used water for the residential necessity which was a bit popular than the industry which used only 23 percent. Next agriculture 17 percent making it least popular. Likewise in California people opted to water for residential usage with 39 percent as opposed to the industry with 33 percent while agriculture with 28 percent is less popular. Subsequently, in another part of world agriculture is three times as popular than the industry compare 69 and 23 percent, respectively. However, the residential share is in last on the list with 8 percent which was the lowest used.
- Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions. 56
- The bar chart below shows the number of students in three different courses from 2001-2004. Identify the main trends and summarize the data 61
- The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of the public. To what extent do you agree? 61
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, Californiaand the rest of the world. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...ure 17 percent making it least popular. Likewise in California people opted to water for...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 498, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as popular 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...d agriculture is three times as popular than the industry compare 69 and 23 percent,...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, likewise, look, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0875 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76936364532 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1075811538 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17918159047 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930456659713 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889209296311 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173297225744 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841403135759 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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