In recent decades to obtaining a huge profit from sales of commodity closely relates to advertisements by excluding real requires of community. I completely agree with this statement due to today's large companies sales their goods via the effort of advertisements.
To begin with, the force of advertisement advancing rapidly owing to usefulness for business executives by ensuring them multiple incomes. For this reason, the vast majority of the company turned to attract purchasers through vibrant advertisement such as adding local celebrities which promote to selling goods. For instance, before New Year researchers from the USA conducted a survey about the best drink among residents and the majority of them opted to "Coca-cola" which has a great impact on people through Santa Claus. Consequently, it reveals that the type of advertisements may influence them to sell a product which does not have attributes than others.
Secondly, the number of products drastically rising that why it became quite difficult to choose a unique item. Nowadays people tend to choose a distinctive item despite the benefits of this. To illustrate, natural products such as milk or traditional food concede to dehydrated foods which become a severe problem for our society including obesity or sickness of the nation so it is all the influence of thoughtful advertisement. Therefore, the real requirement of society often broken by virtue of advertisements.
To conclude, to sell a product, advertisement plays crucial role whilst it may affect to detrimental choose of people.
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- Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? give reasons and relevant examples. 56
- Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten.What is your view? Discuss.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44897959184 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25629880118 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665306122449 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5919083153 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.363636364 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132168500479 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048312410068 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373406384832 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769796022491 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466602273898 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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