Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom. What extent do you agree or disagree?
In current scenario, everyone wants freedom in each and every aspect of life with a view to enjoying their life. It is urged by some citizens that parents should give immensely freedom to their preteen as it us beneficial for them although it has also plethora of ripple effects on them. Hence, I am partially in the favour of proposed thought.
To begin with, there are a couple of advantages to allow the children whatever they want yo do. Firstly, children, due ti freedom in every step of life can learn how to work independently. To quote an example, according to research of Waterloo university, renowned university of Canada, children whom have plenty of freedom by their parents can think and learn new things devoid of any aid. By the dint of, they can enhance their critical thinking skill. Secondly, parents and children come to acquainted about any hidden attitudes of children. As a result, with the help of hidden skill,they make their career better.
Nevertheless, it has numerous detrimental impacts on the behavior of children. First and foremost, children may inculcate the bad habits such as, smoking, drinking, and drug addiction because of parent's uninvolved parenting style. To cite an example, teenagers, in recent era, are more addicted with the wrong habits as compared to the youngsters, Chuch can be considered as an epitome. Moreover, they might be indulged themselves into the petty crimes at the small age because of freedom. Then they may try to start the felony as well, which engender the imprisonment at the early stage of age.
To conclude, parents should follow the authoritative parenting style. They should allow them to.do whatever they want but by constantly keeping one eye on them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04529616725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69144762136 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620209059233 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7553198215 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126580246997 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410886232671 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355635283034 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686336594647 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468569877162 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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