Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence.
What is your opinion?
Since the dawn of time, enhancing life has always been chief priority of humans. Because of this, much has been debated about who should assume responsibility for making alterations in society. A school of thought holds that the governing body can deliver life-changing decisions for the betterment of society, whilst others opine that normal residents can be influential figures making the world a better place to live in. In this answer, I will explore the rationale behind both sentiments before giving my opinion.
It is understandable why some people advocate the role of government in changing people’s life. Chief among these is that people holding top positions wield the power to administer stringent rules, curbing social problems , which is of tremendous importance to a country’s well-rounded development. In light of overpopulation associating with social ills such as crime or drug trafficking, nobody else but the government can prevent the situations from further deteriorating. By fining criminals and drug dealers heavily or sentencing those offenders to prisons can deter them from commiting offenses again, which can greatly contribute to life quality improvement. This is a testament to the role of government as a key to life enhancement
Together with the role of the state, residents can also act as influencers who can change society. Ordinary people are likely to have a deep insight into the most urgent problems that the public are facing, thus applying themselves to invent new life-enhancing technologies or devise practical solutions to uplift their living standards. In fact, there are several programs organised by the state to incentivize people to speak out their opinions or empirical advices to help better people’s life. Ted Talks is a case in point, attracting thoundsands of inspirational speakers to deliver their own thoughts and solutions for pressing issues, which can influence people the world over in a good way.
In conclusion, changing the world is a massive undertaking that warrants joint effort of either leaders of a country or residents. Therefore, goverment should consult ordinary people’ opinions to adjust legislation, contributing to the development of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49565217391 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07468269817 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631884057971 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7114633846 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.428571429 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233269875231 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756426216469 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565084632318 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129890587468 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395637133222 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.