Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in the society, while other think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?
It is frequently argued by the people whether the changes that have to be done in the society are within the hands of the government or individuals. In my view, there can be factors those only government can only change. However, there are also some aspects that individuals can also handle.
Long-term projects such as construction of a bridge or development of the roads can be executed very well by the government. However, in such projects what individuals can do is nothing but, paying taxes for the development of infrastructure. For example, building dams or modifying the roads. Moreover, providing basic essential needs at affordable prices and development in the education systems might also bring prolific changes within the society. For instance, for poor people, providing basic medical check ups at reasonable prices. Thus, such long-term projects can root for the enhancement of the society.
Small projects like initiating plantation of the trees or just maintaining the hygiene of the colony can be handled by the individuals. Initiating and sustaining that project can bring a lot of influence. For example, every Sunday, social rotary clubs clean river side or park area. These clubs can also spread awareness about conservation of the environment and also have a good influence on the future generation. Moreover, saving a certain amount of money and donating to a charity also raises social awareness and importance of the belonging. For instance, individuals can donate there money those were saved to orphanages instead of the birthday celebration parties. Hence, small-term projects can account for effective modifications in the society.
Thus, government can work on a number of projects which can help towards the modification of the society. Likewise, individuals can start small changes initiating from them that might inculcate values and basic ethics within the future generation. In my opinion, for influencing the society both government and individuals have a crucial role to play.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3880126183 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95611033339 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520504731861 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1050405193 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8947368421 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273395181062 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922611771187 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697271167743 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203040637535 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930592039279 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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