Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
We should mark the fact that citizens’ health care is one of the top – priority mission of the global governments with the leaven cementing one prosperous nation. Some believe that the state leaders should make every effort to set the environment problems and housing problems at minimal rate with the ultimate aim of preventing sickness. Individually, I completely inclined towards this point of view.
Bearing in my mind, housing problems are the root causes posing numerous incurable diseases to human. As the foremost, in many backward countries, millions of people still live in unhygienic surrounding even they cannot afford a home or clothing. Obviously, unhealthy surroundings are the breeding ground of bacteria, mosquitoes and flies. Furthermore, since these are carriers of illnesses, slum dwellers and people living in poor surroundings fall into illness quite often. If the current state official provides affordable housing to all, the living standards of millions of people in underdeveloped countries will improve substantially.
More importantly, due to environmental pollution, the quality of air, water and soil has decreased causing various illnesses in people. For instance, respiratory illnesses are quite common among people living in metropolis owing to the poor quality of air in urban areas. Besides that, water pollution causes illness like typhoid, jaundice and dysentery. While these diseases can affect anyone, people living in dirty surroundings are more likely to be affected by them.
In conclusion, the governments should endeavor to address the environmental contamination, by coincidence solve housing problems in order to guarantee a healthy community.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70078740157 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05605148499 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661417322835 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0283063896 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20702519235 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061533870843 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046778921249 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12050395588 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443860339218 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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