Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
This is hot-debate between the cliques of society over the responsibility of children to make them good members and whether it should be take by school or parents. Although school plays an important role of overall development of children but parent have humongous role in children lives.This essay will outline both views and then present opinion.
In general, most schools are open four to six hour for five days of week and remaining time they are there with parents. Firstly, “what you sow is what you reap”,this popular quote emphasizes the current situation accurately. Parents always instill good values therefore it is easily reflects those habits in society. In addition to that,children always looks their folks as heroes. Thus , if praised at good work this not only motivate them but also act as catalyst to become good member. For instance the richest person on this earth Bill Gates says when he was five to six year older her mother brings loads of books and give ultimatum of reading daily 50 pages. This not only help him to become bibliophile but also a great person. This proves how effective parents can be.
while school does play an important role,but, their conditions of teaching and responsibility of developing overall characters of children are degrading day by day.Their focus is divided because of large number of students in a class.Their is always a good chance of bias between higher and lower marks student in class and thus this not only demotivate them but also push towards them depression. Apart from that , the lack of action towards the episodes of bullies make their situation worse.For instance the survey conducted by Harvard Business School says that 65% of schools are bias,among them 25% lack hygiene and 10% lack required teachers.This surveys results prove the lack of ability of schools to instill good values to their future generations.
To recapitulate,”you cannot clap by one hand” ,the parents and schools are concrete pillars of society but with degrading conditions of school, parents are more responsible for developing children as good and prideful members of our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18624641834 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82752588649 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598853868195 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.739521471 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.230769231 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229396706107 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863785292646 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607954964802 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153545356992 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561368252463 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.