Being a society member is necessary to learn for everyone. It is often argued that the teaching mission about how the kids can be an excellent one in society, should be assigned to parents or school. In my view, I believe that school should be this character to teach the pupils.
To begin with, the functions of school is not only teaching the academic knowledge for pupils but also have a lesson to express the acknowledge of being a moral person. For example, the acknowledge of following the rules of the traffic light is learned by teachers usually, not the parents while they may also be a teacher to talk about it. Teachers and school are a suitable place as well as own the responsibility to educate their pupils about all the knowledge that they have not learned. Therefore, the majority role of educating about become a society member should be played by the school.
The topic of being a society member is difficult to explain for the kids, this may acquire a high education level person to deliver. So, we may concern that some parents are just graduate at primary school, who even cannot explain a simple story for their kids. Therefore, take into account the different education levels of each parent, the mission of society lesson should be taught by teachers as far as their education background is higher.
In conclusion, since the purpose of school education is related with society as well as the educational basis of parents may not able for teaching children, I strongly believe that school is the best role to educate them.
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- The chart bellow shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. 11
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...upils but also have a lesson to express the acknowledge of being a moral person. For example, t...
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Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e of being a moral person. For example, the acknowledge of following the rules of the traffic l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75836431227 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52589578725 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516728624535 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9101950545 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.363636364 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256236580912 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1186364436 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677445916403 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175538998492 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926428649776 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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