Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays we are living in modern age, so that people have to do many things to survive in this world. Thus, human being should do hard work and much other exercise like enrolled in sport activities nd some other things to improve their health. Men and women now both interested in outdoor games and it's also help to them to stable their fitness. sport facilities also increasing everyday with developement. In addition to, bundles of physical activity increase and help to society to straight their health. When a public start to play sport their body become warm and help to fight against bad things, which is store in body and public stay healthy. For instance, such as cricket,hockey,football and so many other sport, which succour to person at everyway to become fit and healthy. it is undeniable that, sport is important for people to keep health ,but there are many way to stay fit likewise yoga, exercise, meditation, paying indoor games and so on. All way have their own benefit to improve public health.However society's people should do all things for change their lifestyle and make it better than before. For example, sport is helps to people to only physically not mentally. Hence, everyone have to participate in all things ,which helps to public to mentally and physically both way. In recapitulation, it can be deem that sport is not only to improve health of public.I tend to deem that sport and other facilities both helps to improve health of ours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Sport
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...tness. sport facilities also increasing everyday with developement. In addition to, bund...
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Suggestion: , hockey
...y healthy. For instance, such as cricket,hockey,football and so many other sport, which...
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...t is important for people to keep health ,but there are many way to stay fit likew...
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Suggestion: many ways
...or people to keep health ,but there are many way to stay fit likewise yoga, exercise, me...
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Suggestion: However
...ir own benefit to improve public health.However societys people should do all things fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85657370518 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71115464666 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549800796813 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3344142916 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0637420524364 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267646242176 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222745539069 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637420524364 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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