Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there are many opinions about teaching children. Children should be taught at home or in school, which is the best place for them. There are many advantages and disadvantages in training children both in house and school. I will explain some benefits and drawbacks for both.
Firstly, before the kid go to school, his parents will educate him at home. They will teach him about behavior to others in family. They will teach him about sharing his toys and something with other kids. However, if he is the single kid in his family, it is difficult for him to practice this sharing. This will be able to set up his selfish. When he comes to school, he will have many friends and he will know how share his toys and hobbies with others.
Secondly, at home, parents will instruct their children how they should do to solve their problems, these comments are often good for them. In school, they are also taught by their teachers but besides their teachers, the kids can get the bad instructions from their friends. They can solve their issues in the negative ways. Not good friends will impact to them.
Finally, there are many children who are living in family that their parents are always busy with their business. The parents think that they only need to give the best life conditions to their kids and they are teaching their kids how solve his issues independently. This can make the children fell alone at their home. They will be difficult to contact with others in social. In school, teacher will train the children how working team to solve problem via discussion with their partners and they will open their mind and feeling.
Summary, the children trained at home or in school will have both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, we should instruct them how to find good news and bad news as be taught by their parents, teachers and friends. From that they will choose the suitable information and will have right behavior and become good members of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75433526012 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29463206112 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468208092486 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5320248956 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7727272727 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215575184717 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763621407042 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434866910376 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143075412334 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573168596032 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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