Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that children should become a civilized members of society by learning from their parents, while others believed that the best place to learn is at school. In my opinion, I believe that parents have an important role to build the characters of the children, while the schools will be the best place for children to socialize with people from various background.
On the one hand, parents are the first teacher for their children and the home is their secondary school until they reach the adult age. The parents' role are essentials to put the foundations of life lessons which will be affected the children characters. Educating children about love, compassion, empathy, and another acceptably social behavior is taken firstly at home. In addition, parents should teach their children about social responsibility that will be great gesture for children while they are adapting in society.
On the other hand, the role of school is as important as parents to build the children's characters and knowledge that will give a positive contribution to the society. Socializing with people from various economic, race, and belief backgrounds will enhance their sense of empathy. Also, children will learn about the cooperation and they will help each others if they find difficulties in learning the subjects.
Finally, in my opinion, parents is the key to build the children's characters because they know their children since they were born and have an obligation to instill the moral values. In contrast, school have a role to teach about respecting people from different backgrounds.
In conclusion, parents and school have their own role to teach the children. Teaching them to become morally and socially responsible can be done both at home and school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'member'?
Suggestion: member
...that children should become a civilized members of society by learning from their paren...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...ool until they reach the adult age. The parents role are essentials to put the foundati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18685121107 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67437116122 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487889273356 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9724284902 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298104671886 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125064405736 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745136475282 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190701308469 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079135474833 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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