some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to teach this
A commonly held belief is that parents have the responsibility on educating their kids how to be good members of society. Apparently, some others may claim that school is the best place for children to learn this. This article will discuss about these two opinions.
However, everyone knows that kids always spend most of their time with their parents or at home. So obviously, parents ought to have more time to educate kids than school, they are also the initial guides in a child’s life. Therefore, parents play a fundamental role in making children understand and adapt to the society, they also play a role model for their children.
On the other hand, school is a influential place for the education of children, which not only teach them knowledge, but also teach them how to behave. Combined with the professional education of school, perhaps school is a more effective place to educate children about society. Some social practice activities in the school can also let students have a better understanding of the society, and can enhance the sense of integration into the society and the collective concept of children.
To my point of view, neither parents' independent education nor schools' independent education is lacking. Children cannot become good citizens of society unless parents and schools cooperate and play a coordinating role in the education of their children. Both of them should play an important role in children’s growing up, that’s what this essay holds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...children. On the other hand, school is a influential place for the education of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11885245902 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71669999853 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553278688525 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8251643163 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.083333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322578499069 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119846430619 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756687959504 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201966852176 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783492064883 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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